listening now.

Nice rhythm. Sounds slightly too fast, is it hardcore?. Nice little break without the kick. Builds up well. Sounding a little flat though, not much coming through on the very high freq's. I like the vocal effect in the back ground. That lead sounds a little too techno for my liking. Nice elevation around 4 minutes. Everything seems to fit together well and it flows well. All the layers pay off. Nice production. Sorry I can't be more constructive.

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Originally posted by JmanNZ listening now. Nice rhythm. Sounds slightly too fast, is it hardcore?. Nice little break without the kick. Builds up well. Sounding a little flat though, not much coming through on the very high freq's. I like the vocal effect in the back ground. That lead sounds a little too techno for my liking. Nice elevation around 4 minutes. Everything seems to fit together well and it flows well. All the layers pay off. Nice production. Sorry I can't be more constructive.

thanks man, your opinion means alot! every little bit helps. and no, the track isnt hardcore




keep em coming

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Last edited by Apollos Prelude on Mar-17-2009 at 11:36

bump: plz?

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Sounded good to me.

1. really cool bass line and melodies
2. this is prolly due to the website, but even though its a demo it could sound a little bit brighter
3. add some percussion or sound fx because the song is pretty straightforward with no parts that make me say "whoa, didn't see that one coming"
4. all in all, it sounds cohesive, though a little too predictable, but i could definitely see it being played in a club/rave.

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Originally posted by ******** sounds muffled. far too repetitive... although has some good elements... I'd totally re-eq it. very very muddy. Don't be thrown off though, probably the best track I've heard today on TA.

i will agree with you on needing work with the EQ.


but i wouldnt call it repetitive, its a progressive tune after all

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bump: any last comments on this one?

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