nice but im not sure where vocals could fit in there- + the ending needs some work cause im not sure that little melody at the end works with the main synth melo u have.

Do you mean the part after the break? Or the very last bit where it cools down?

I've canned the second part of the track and reworked the first half a bit.

Here is the new first half

And here is a sample of a little minimal tune (work in progress) which I plan to use as the last track on my album when I finish it one day

SYRRANO - PERFECT WORLD by syrrano