Another jam, always looking for feedback, the legit kind, unlike when you play something for your friends and to them its always good. I want some TA critism. Drop a linnnnnnnneeeee .

Link:
http://appliedscience.podbean.com/2...y-original-mix/

Thanks in advance to any replies

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Originally posted by AppliedScience Another jam, always looking for feedback, the legit kind, unlike when you play something for your friends and to them its always good. I want some TA critism. Drop a linnnnnnnneeeee . Link: http://appliedscience.podbean.com/2...y-original-mix/ Thanks in advance to any replies

It sucks...





















The air out of the room like da fuel air bomb!

Seriously, the tune, being what it is, is very well mixed and the sound-design seems to be well thought out. I definitely think it could be developed past what it is, but while keeping pretty much everything you've got, so far.

If you want to keep it minimal, don't change a thing, but I could also hear a more developed version with a bit more attention paid to progression.