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Starts off nicely, but the piano/arpeggio sound a little muddy.
Cuts and gating seem a little awkward and over-done.
At the point where the bit-crushed/formant-filtered line starts coming in, I wanted to hear a progression with the other parts that are playing.
It got really cluttered at that point and I'm not sure if dropping, everything but the kick, and rebuilding was the best choice - but that could work.
At the point the rolling bass-line comes in, it sounds out of key, in places.
Once the formant-lead is cut, the harmonic dissonance problem disappears.
Mix is very, very imbalanced and "in the face".
Consider shelving the rolling bass and the filtered kicks.
A lot of very good ideas, so far as general music and filter sweeps are concerned, thoughout, that needs refining.
Strings, at the end, are pretty, but harsh, and I was kind of hoping that was going to be a break rather than a simple harmonic reprise being utilized for a tail.
It needs some major adjustments, but this tune has a lot of things going for it.
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