Demo for Armada-asot 2010

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This is my second attemp at making a professional demo for armada label .
Until now i was posting my tracks in youtube where i managed to get more than 780 subscribers , that subscribed because they liked my music , under the allias Dj Mars

Ok , you ll hear the 02.30 minutes( from 01.30 to 4.00 ) ( estimated length aproximately 8 minutes) , this is the amateur version where i ve laid my ideas , when i ll have finished the amateur version i ll start making the profesional version where i ll add more things and make it even more interesting , and of course make it completely profesional ( exept mastering which i am not skilled enough to do it on my own) .

Any serious feedback would be much apreciated ... ! Thank you


LINK : http://www.sendspace.com/file/txc1qn



P.S: The reason i am posting this sample in here is because i would like some constructive critisism in order to make my track as better as i can ,

Thank you very much

If this is your "amateur" mix, why you'd want feedback on something you know is not ready.

Post a clip of your "professional" version, and we'll be glad to point out what is needed.

Liking the Piano melodies by the way.

Cheers

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Great intro, now you have to looking for a good kickass bassline
but i don't like the piano replace it with a guitar or a plunk synth

i'm waiting for your complete version

cheers

Mat

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Thank you very much guys , i ll post the complete version when i ll have finished it . cheers

Oh dear. This again.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Oh dear. This again.

Of *********** off ... whats your problem ? Mind your own bussiness ...