i started this song last night ... and welll so far it has progressed into this .. a song that has alot of potential to be good ... with the right direction ... but i stuck .. so i am asking for some direction ... point me to where this song should go

thanks


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i cant really provide a critique as eloquent as some on here do but one thing. It's clipping all the way through, you should either adjust your levels or use a limiter.

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Hi Dj-Matts

I couldn't hear any clipping.
I liked the pads at the start, sounds chilled.
Also the sound that comes in at 15 secs sounds good, but there might be a bit 2 much reverb on it imo.

Ya also need to put more perc in there, all i can hear is a ride sound all the way through.
I dont like the sound that comes in bout 2 mins though, sounds kinda cheezy.
Try to bring in some perc at 30 secs and build from there.
And just remember that the main melody from most trance tracks comes in after 3mins.

Hope that helps.
baz.

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i improved the song .... please give some feedback

please listen ////......... for sure u wont regret ..



its blatantly copyrighted ,,,,
and its with fruity loops.....