I dunno if it was intentional, but this track has a really retro mid 90's feel to it.

If I am honest, I wasn't a fan of the original (Which is like rejecting Jesus in trance terms haha)

Personally, I would have done something a bit more complex/aggressive with the bassline. as, fo me, that was the weakest link. (IMO anyway)

Really loved the FX going off in the beginning though and your production has been comingo n in leaps and bounds! Keep it up!

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cheers for the reply bren , tbh i didnt go for the intention , just the sort of sounds i remember back in the day.This tune reminds me of my early days of driving , was on my first car cd back in 2000.

As for the bassline , i only tryed a tiestoesque one and it didnt give me the boomy drive that i wanted , but i might experiment further.

cheers for the feedback anyhows!

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dont think i ever replied to any of your songs so heres one

i think its pretty good. you want me to pick anything out? i dont like the resonance on the clap. pretty good flow, nice work.

cheers msz , dont worry , im gonna give some feedback to yours tomorrow,

every lttle helps !

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ive listened to a few pieces of yours in the past, must say this would be my fav one(seems put together better) sorry if im wrong, alas, you are getting better fasho

i know you only like certain forms of music , and why the facebook?

gonna miss your crazy status's

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I am not familiar with the original track, but I'm listening...

good percussive fx. they add a nice touch.
kick and bass seem pretty solid. The hats sound ok, a bit much like theyre coming from a machine though.
the buildup is a bit slow for my taste. especially at the beginning of the breakdown, there could be more going on.
after the long buildup I expected a bit more energy on the main part, and maybe a new melody, or at least a variation.


it might be me, but this track is very minimal in progress. I'd wish for a bit more interchange. then again, I dont know much about the genre and what people who listen to this kind of music want to hear on the dancefloor. I'd definitely say more elements and variation will not hurt, even if they're subtle.
still, the execution of this track is good. the sound is clean and the fundament is there.

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Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de