Hi guys , new track.

comments are welcome.

http://www.myspace.com/outburstmusic1

thx =)

cmon guys , don't be shy...

Try something else than MySpace and you might get a response.

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lovely intro, until the bassline came in, make it flow more?

in the 140sec on ward mark there's a few off notes in there

lovely work in the break and great iders to but also to long with out a beat. I think a pro artist were to remix this and it would go off

over all good tune

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i think we can work on it more,rather than a "pro" artist to remix it.thx for your opinion.
anyone else?

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Originally posted by OutburstMusic i think we can work on it more,rather than a "pro" artist to remix it.thx for your opinion. anyone else?

Listening to it right now, commenting as I go
Already from the start, I would love this in 320kbps mp3, I can feel the player is limiting the sweetness of the sound

the notes at 140 are giving it that minor/7th feel i dont know what peter is talking about lol

that synth could be sharper imo (little more highs?)

getting goosebumps at 3:20 nice buildup, once again WHY MYSPACE

lead synth should cut more in the mix imo
well done, track is straightforward, but powerful, good work

thx man i appreciate it..

sorry for the myspace thing i didn't know this forum is sensitive to this case =D

more comments plz?

Jus cause the quality is low (like u tube) so hard to get producers to review something when they cant hear it properly...

Was gunna review, but cause ive been watching 2 much porn my university have restricted bandwidth for a few hours, ill come back

thx for sharing this information with us mark =)
waiting for your reply&others =D

Hey

Enjoyed this track.... im no pro so hard to give pro advice but for me the bass needs something, it kind of sounds muffled a bit. Maybe add something in there??? a sub bass or something.

I suppose it depends on your style of trance, but these days trance has so many layers and sounds all happening together. This reminds me of trance from around 5 years ago, so to make it modern id think of adding some more elements to it, give it more atmosphere. I think this may be a personal thing, but I love a kick that really comes through, and I think yours is a little weak sounding

All round good though!

Out of interest, what did you use to make this?

FL Studio rewired to Cubase and a lot of inspiration from alphazone =DDD
thx for your comment.