hey guys!

i'm a 16-year-old producer from the United States.

i'd love your feedback on this work in progress!

[http://www.speedyshare.com/159983959.html

please let me know what you think!

Last edited by ekowraith on Jun-04-2009 at 02:52

I think a lot of people including me will think , because your young that this will be a very amature production and therefore rubbish.

And errr ... how wrong was i.

The only thing i can point out , is to widen certain parts , stereo seperate it , would give it a nice wide feeling.

But overall it great.

unless this is someone elses mix that your passing off as your own hehe

great job

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hahah. no, this is definitely my composition!

by the way, fl studio is awesome! it's what i'm using here.

This is really nice dude! Amazingly well done.

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This is really nice dude! Amazingly well done.

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i updated the original post with the finished track!

Sounds pretty good but honestly this kind of music triggers my gag reflex. What part did you play in this "remix?" I know young producers are notorious for taking pre-existing tracks, adding something trivial to it and maybe changing the arrangement, then putting their name on it. Did you build this from scratch? Where did you get the vocals and guitar sample?

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Originally posted by meriter Sounds pretty good but honestly this kind of music triggers my gag reflex. What part did you play in this "remix?" I know young producers are notorious for taking pre-existing tracks, adding something trivial to it and maybe changing the arrangement, then putting their name on it. Did you build this from scratch? Where did you get the vocals and guitar sample?

The only part that I didn't make was the vocals. The guitar is from a VSTi. I arranged the rest.

Waht's up I like this mix of your it sounds real good.

I just think the overall track has too much mid-range and high-end white noise. plus i think your bass sound needs a cut somewhere around 200-500hz its just a tad too "muddy"

but its awesome good jam!

Last edited by Nightshift on Jun-05-2009 at 01:07

Thank you!

I wish Meriter would expand upon what he meant. Did the presumption that my changes to the original were trivial "trigger his gag reflex", or was it the style of music that disppointed?

This is the original, by the way:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDcTEm3U2Ro

To refute the criticism that young producers make insignificant changes, I didn't use any similar instruments or even the same chord progression.

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Originally posted by ekowraith Thank you! I wish Meriter would expand upon what he meant. Did the presumption that my changes to the original were trivial "trigger his gag reflex", or was it the style of music that disppointed? This is the original, by the way: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDcTEm3U2Ro To refute the criticism that young producers make insignificant changes, I didn't use any similar instruments or even the same chord progression.

yah that guy needs to go find an emo forum to post on. remixing is as much work as any original and a lot of times i work twice as hard on them

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Originally posted by ekowraith i'm a 16-year-old producer from the United States.

This track is amazing work for such a young kid

I no longer enjoy trance but I can appreciate a quality production!