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hi dude,
i know it's hard what'll come.
but ur sound sux 
- it sounds very young, beginner like (but only the sound!)
- you should try to use better samples, pump em up a little (i hear lotsa 909 there hihi ).
u got lotsa things u can use in reason. eq, limitiing, comp. USE THEM!
start from bottom to top. kick, bass, snare, sounds, pads, hh's and stuff.
+ your arrangement is very good, listened twice to your song 
+ automations are good too.
+ your ideas are sweet too dude i love the meoldy, could've come out of me head.
+ the chicken sound was cool too lol
so overall, pretty cool. but like...not releasable like that.
oh, and more panning please 
SO...good work, keep on dude, dont give up. ur like potentially potential 
greetings
me
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