Here's my version of Cryophonik ft.Avonlea Montague -Telescope.

I think the mix could be better specially after the breakdown.

send feedback please.

http://soundcloud.com/beamrider/cry...beamrider-remix

cheers

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I know that there are pretty good remixes for this song out there but I think mine deserves a listen too.



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Hard panned, whispered "Search for you" sounds a little creepy - stalker creepy. Just my impression and if that's what you're going for...

I like the bass-line - it could come up a little.

I like the minimal feel to this.

The mix is nice and clean but could, possibly, be a little brighter.

Lead coming in after the break sounds a little chintzy and there are some tracks that aren't in key.

Drums and percussion could be progressed a little beyond their current state.

I also dont like the creepy searching for you. As a background vocal it is far too different from the main vocals. Just seems strange to me.

The whisper is a bit creepy, it's cool, but I don't think it goes that great with the original vocals.
The bass could definitely be brought up.
I agree that it could be brighter as well.
I don't really like the piano during the breakdown, not sure if you combined it with it with a piano, or it's synthesized altogether, but I'm just not digging the sound.
It has some great ideas though, it could be fixed up into a really cool track!

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Hard panned, whispered "Search for you" sounds a little creepy - stalker creepy. Just my impression and if that's what you're going for...

LOL You are right. It sounds like someone is whispering right in your ear.

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