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Hey guys this is my latest tune, this time I was inspired by Mark Norman so hopefully you'll like it, I guess it's a mixture between tech trance and uplifting trance. Feedback is very welcome =) Positive and negative =)

Last edited by josh_destino on Jul-12-2009 at 21:52

Hmm, the intro definitely needs some work - I don't really like the beat, and the whole thing just sounds pretty hollow.

The percussions sound almost nonexistent as they're pushed so far back in the mix. I'm on headphones so it might just be that but the bass is so overpowering it sounds like it's distorting at times.

The synth lines seem very strange - something's off there, almost sounds out of key at times. Your synths sound very videogame/software-like which can be a good thing but I don't think it really works here.

All in all I'd say you have some nice ideas here but the overall track needs some work.

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The kick sounds a touch too loud and overbearing during the intro, maybe soften it by ~2 db...

At :50, the percs and such overpower the synth - I think it should be the other way around. The bass is also very loud and distorted - it just dominates everything else. It needs to be a lot softer.

I kind of like the video game synths - it works reasonably well for something like this, with a slightly techy feel. And I love the lead synth! I can imagine it tearing up a crowd over massive speakers.

...So yeah, apart from your bass mixing problems, I like it, well done!

Final radio edit up now!! Tell me what you think =) Made some improvements based on your comments =)