I listened to Moon Tripping.

Firstly, I liked the intro (even if it was a bit cheesy).

Is it supposed to be multi-tonal? Your intro is firmly in G minor but when the beat comes in you keep G minor in the treble with bass in A minor. Then at 3 minutes in there's another break which is in C minor and then you bring the bass back in A minor! Trance may be art music but don't take it too far - the multi-tonality just makes it sound wrong. Some people might like it though...

There's some good ideas but no coherence - get that bass to sit on G instead of A all the way through and it'll make the track suddenly much better.

You need to stop changing to different ideas all the time and keep one theme and work on that - you've got about 3 or 4 different themes.

Sorry, don't mean to sound negative - your production's pretty solid, just take more care with the musical side.

Hi, Take a listen to The Night Fall [Digital Mix], Thanks for your review though
i'll keep that in mind, the problem is that this is my style, the Israeli people go crazy over this kind of music, i'll invite you sometime to Israel and you'll see for yourself what Israel's clubbers like



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