cool track dude, the intro not working well on my speakers; maybe you can add another bass to fill up the mid lows.(just a thought im my head, a bass that goes ba dum dumm.) very goodbreak. like the new bass later in the track, maybe even open the bass filter more if you can.

very original and deep/minimal in some sense, i like it, just giving you my personal thoughts.

hehe i gave up remixing feelings for now, its just not clicking into a track, maybe when i upgrade my pc it will go smoother and will try again.
i made a cool clip using your samples, its not eqd very well.
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cheers

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Originally posted by msz cool track dude, the intro not working well on my speakers; maybe you can add another bass to fill up the mid lows.(just a thought im my head, a bass that goes ba dum dumm.) very goodbreak. like the new bass later in the track, maybe even open the bass filter more if you can. very original and deep/minimal in some sense, i like it, just giving you my personal thoughts. hehe i gave up remixing feelings for now, its just not clicking into a track, maybe when i upgrade my pc it will go smoother and will try again. i made a cool clip using your samples, its not eqd very well. [[ LINK REMOVED ]] cheers

thanks for the comment. there is quite alot in the track that could be fixed, but so far i think i'm going to leave it like this. :P i think i extended the track length 3 times already aswell..

good thing you gave it a try. that sample you made is awesome. keep it up.

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Really nice atmosphere, especially after the break. I would have loved some tribal vocals evolving from the mist.

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Originally posted by Chronosis Really nice atmosphere, especially after the break. I would have loved some tribal vocals evolving from the mist.

cheers. not a bad idea though..

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omg I love this!

Man you are getting better and better each day ... I'm burning this and spinning at the next gig for sure. AMAZING!

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Originally posted by Branah omg I love this! Man you are getting better and better each day ... I'm burning this and spinning at the next gig for sure. AMAZING!

wow. i am honored to hear that it is dj mix worthy thanks alot!

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Last edited by QuantumPlay on Jul-27-2009 at 05:57

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Originally posted by QuantumPlay wow. i am honored to hear that it is dj mix worthy thanks alot!

you hit it on the spot
thank you for sharing it

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Will play this during one of my forthcoming Sense.fm shows, very atmospheric stuff

Intro is a bit of a non event.

Kick breaks through nice and clear

You have a cymbal sound that might need to have the tail shortened slightly though as it sounds like it's interfering with your pads around the 5:55 mark. Makes the track hiss a little too much in my opinion.

Bassline is perhaps a little understated for my taste and tends to be dominated by the percs, it is my feeling that they should rest on top of it rather than be controlled by them.
What I mean is that if you took the cymbals and stuff out the track would drop in volume considerably as they are the loudest component and you have other elements in there that need to be brought forward.

The relationship between the kick and the bass isn't working in my opinion. If you haven't done so already send the bass and the kick to the same buss, compress together so that they Gel i.e. one is not overpowered by the other and then perhaps put a gentle limiter on them so that you raise up the overall volume.

The sidechain on bass is nice but lost in the overall mix.

Percs are well constructed otherwise.

The first bassline is lost in the mix and needs work.

I'm not saying this is a bad track, on the contrary but this is what I would address if I had it placed in front of me.

Still feels like a work in progress though and could possible do with some additions to the arrangement as it comes across as quite linear at the moment.

I did enjoy it and feel that this is still a good job, so thank you for sharing.

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Intro is a bit of a non event. Kick breaks through nice and clear You have a cymbal sound that might need to have the tail shortened slightly though as it sounds like it's interfering with your pads around the 5:55 mark. Makes the track hiss a little too much in my opinion. Bassline is perhaps a little understated for my taste and tends to be dominated by the percs, it is my feeling that they should rest on top of it rather than be controlled by them. What I mean is that if you took the cymbals and stuff out the track would drop in volume considerably as they are the loudest component and you have other elements in there that need to be brought forward. The relationship between the kick and the bass isn't working in my opinion. If you haven't done so already send the bass and the kick to the same buss, compress together so that they Gel i.e. one is not overpowered by the other and then perhaps put a gentle limiter on them so that you raise up the overall volume. The sidechain on bass is nice but lost in the overall mix. Percs are well constructed otherwise. The first bassline is lost in the mix and needs work. I'm not saying this is a bad track, on the contrary but this is what I would address if I had it placed in front of me. Still feels like a work in progress though and could possible do with some additions to the arrangement as it comes across as quite linear at the moment. I did enjoy it and feel that this is still a good job, so thank you for sharing. Cheers Nem

thanks for the detailed review and excellent tips. will definately develop the tracks in the future more as i learn to use the software available to me.

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