i,m downloading now and will give feedback for you but this post belongs in the production promo forum

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Originally posted by owien i,m downloading now and will give feedback for you but this post belongs in the production promo forum

thank you buddy ! I think the moderators will send it there ! I posted it here because more people would see my post ,lol

well the track is not to bad but the vocal is out of time so you may want to play around with that. also when it comes to sending tracks to labels like armins it needs to be doing something outstanding to gain interest or sound very much like the tracks signed to them in the firsthand.

so i will say you need more production time under your belt

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Originally posted by owien well the track is not to bad but the vocal is out of time so you may want to play around with that. also when it comes to sending tracks to labels like armins it needs to be doing something outstanding to gain interest or sound very much like the tracks signed to them in the firsthand. so i will say you need more production time under your belt

ok thanx mate , the truth is i ve far more better tracks , but they are not at all professional , i agree with you , i just wanted someone to confirm it for me ! Anywayz thanx

no worries not trying to be hard on you but as i said labels like armanda will look for that top end track witch takes time and money if that's the sound you are going for then practice making it

Mate TBH , this is far too cluttered and i cant really tell what is going on.
#1 - that midbass sound is far to loud
#2 -something is clicking and its annoying
#3 -That plucky nexus thing is far too back in the mix and needs to be more a main part of the tune.

And 4# stop making music so it can be played on a particular label.

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Too repetative, lead has no real melody, vocals *shakes head no*, it doesnt really go anywhere either....so I'm gonna say keep trying!

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Armada release some right fucking shite so you may have a good chance with this.

Its no good, no labels would take this.

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Originally posted by DJ Mikey Mike Armada release some right fucking shite so you may have a good chance with this.

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You've got some of the basic sounds but it needs to be much more polished. Remember, you're up against thousands of ASOT listeners just like yourself all working to perfectly EQ and compress their saw leads, airy female vocals, and bandpassed intro sounds. Better get cracking on it!