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Second mix is a vast improvement on the first, well done!
I'm a big advocate of some strong rolling percussion to create energy, I think it would enhance this track hugely - just the one off-beat hat isn't enough imo. You've got a nice melody here and good catchy basslines, I think you just need to keep tweaking, fill in some of the blanks - some parts of the break could benefit from some subtle background noises (FX, white noise, low frequency synth stabs etc) to give some atmosphere and depth. A/B your track against a pro track that has a similar feel to what you're going for and adjust your levels accordingly. As was brought up above, stereo widening and panning on certain elements (generally the higher pitched ones) will help give interest, depth and breadth to your track. Have fun with it!
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