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First of all , dont write in the 3rd person.
DJ archie has...
Please tell me.....
Makes you look silly and will lose you feeback.
To the track....
I personally think that this is a good intro tune for a DJ set , but it needs to build up to something more epic.Its style suggests an intro into a quite uplifting set , so it needs to be quite brash and uplifting obviously.
Other than that , the kick and offbeat bass seem kind of muddy , but nothing to important.
Other than that , overall i think the lead needs something plucky , something to get the crowd going.
Anyways good luck!
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