when the hi hat comes in at one minute i would take the reverb off it.
i think thats whats doing it im not a fan of the verb.

i would cut more lows and raise the highs of the snare thats used to build up into the breakdown.. it sounds kind of conflicting.

and some of the other sounds used conflict. as a recent member explained to me when you hear this just goto the EQ tutorial and give it some eq it worked for me

to be honest i dont like the computery sound of the main riff thats playing through the whole song.
it makes it sound to computer-gamey.

and i think that you need to develop the melody more IMO

but thats just me as i like listening to uplifting trance with massive melodies and all that

so all up i would, at the breakdown develop it more and make it more HEK
lol
and some more trancier elements more strings/ pads/ sawy leads.

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sounds like a great idea, heres mine

i know everything is kinda everywhere but i just started on this, i have yet to EQ

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