Hey guys, this is my newest song! Hope you like it! Please give me some feedback on what I should change. Hey, at 15, I'm still learning

LUX (Rev023) by Anakratis

EDIT:

Rev-023

-Changed "Pluck" Sounds



Thanks!

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Last edited by Anakratis on Sep-14-2009 at 21:48

your bass is a little muddy and to much reverb going through it.

but at 15 pretty good keep it up the good work

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Hi Anakratis,

Where is this track, I can not select it???.

Please re-post this again.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Hi Anakratis, Where is this track, I can not select it???. Please re-post this again.

Sorry about this, I was updating the song

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Hi man,

For 15 this is fantastic, I like the atmosphere, tension and well coordinated drums with base. If any suggestion, I would experiment with more new sound for FX and solo on your synt. I'm impress.
Another grate "young" artist (producer). keep it rolling.

Future is bright for you.

New update (Rev 023). Hopefully sounds better

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did you delete it?

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Originally posted by meriter Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.

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Originally posted by Nightshift did you delete it?

No sorry, it just took about HALF-AN-HOUR to create "waveform"...

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Hi Anakratis,

Overall much better sound. Big step in right direction.
Couple of suggestion for you if you care:

- synt in 3:32 could sound more hmmmmm -different, is to bright (but not to bad)

- synt in 5:24 I would improve to be more smooth, deeper sound.

Try mixing vol level for different synts, that should improve overall quality of your track (cleaner sound structure).

I like and do not take this to personal if you don't like it.
This is only my 2 cents.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Hi Anakratis, Overall much better sound. Big step in right direction. Couple of suggestion for you if you care: - synt in 3:32 could sound more hmmmmm -different, is to bright (but not to bad) - synt in 5:24 I would improve to be more smooth, deeper sound. Try mixing vol level for different synts, that should improve overall quality of your track (cleaner sound structure). I like and do not take this to personal if you don't like it. This is only my 2 cents.

Thank you for the suggestions! I will definitely incorporate these into the track.

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This is nice for being just 15 but nothing about this track stuck out for me. Pretty generic stuff, nothing too special. Mixing is okay, quite clunky and muddy though.

Keep workin at it though its good stuff, you're on the right track.

I see you use Ableton 8 as well so maybe a collaboration sometime?

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Garrido & Skehan ft. Erin - Waiting For You (Nightshift Remix)
Elvin Ong - Motion (Nightshift Remix)
Tidal Forces - Machine Blue (Nightshift Remix)

quote:

Originally posted by meriter Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.

p.s. im following u on soundcloud.

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Garrido & Skehan ft. Erin - Waiting For You (Nightshift Remix)
Elvin Ong - Motion (Nightshift Remix)
Tidal Forces - Machine Blue (Nightshift Remix)

quote:

Originally posted by meriter Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.