Song i started yesterday, took me about 4-5 hours to finish up this rough draft tell me what you think, really bright feel to it

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bump, anybody?

Can you maybe create SoundCloud account and post a link to it.
Is easier for us to play this way than download you song to our system.
I will give it a run if you let me lessen you song not download.

Cheers.

Alright sure thing, just soundcloud lowers the quality a little bit

chordplay by sako487

Seems overcompressed, otherwise I don't mind it.

Let me just say that I run your song three times and it has interesting melody line which I really enjoyed. This for me is the most important step in the process of creation good song. Instrument selection was good with soft sounding drums and well control, tied bass. The last aspect is the mixing or producing which required some help (work). I think overall you have a piece of music which has a lot of potential with some need of work in areas of production. Work on the brightness and depth in the sound of your instruments. You have to find the balance between deep aggressive (with good dynamic range sound) and fit that into your musical structure of this song.

Good luck and let us know when you will have final version of this song available.

Keep the music rolling man.

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Thanks for the comments. I've made the mixdown better, since my first version was made in about 4 hours, lol. About it being the final version, I figured why not let the listeners judge whether its the final version or not. Enjoy and leave comments please!

Chordplay_2 by sako487

interesting bassline dood

I like it. I can't tell you to much because don't have my good headphones with me and is really hard to hear all of those frequencies. Composition is really good. Will give a run when I get back home tonight.

I think you are on something with this song.

Keep them rolling man.

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Thanks a lot, glad you like the bassline!

Beautiful melody line, I really like it. It feels really good to groove with it.

Good job man, can’t find anything wrong so far.

Keep them rolling man.

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Haha thanks man, I can give you the MIDI or FLP if you'd like. Just pm me.