Man, you waveform looks like a giant shaft. Your mixdown is pretty weird and barely audible, so work on that.

I had a master track ambient filter on I finally figured out. I have done a lot to it in the past couple hours. Ill post it soon.

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I like your synth sounds, the phasey one reminds me of the first track on Sasha's GU Ibiza, and there are some other nice noises here as well. It does have a nice laid back feel to it, too. But if you want this to be a dance tune, you need to keep some elements of your percussion centered, the kick at the very least. Having the whole loop panning just sounds weird, and making it come in and out like that makes it sound like you're not sure where you want the track to go.

Added some delays along with some sample delay, threw in a preset filter to the drum tracks. Added some tension roll ins and clip offs. I still feel like I'm missing something on the drum tracks. They don't sound so perpetual but I don't know whether to add in a bass synthesizer that will mix with the new delay or not. Any advice?

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