Well, I didn't hear the first version, so this is my first impression and I like it! It's a very nice chord progression and the arps, pads, bass, and FX blend very nicely to make a track that feels pretty dramatic. The only minor criticism I have is that there seems to be some overlap in the lower frequencies of the snare, the bass, and the kick which is causing a little bit of muudy buildup - that's an easy fix, though and it's not too bad as it is. I really dug this track - nice work!

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Thank man,

I think that compressing bass and kick will help with this issue.
Thank a lot for your time. I really value any comment from you guys.
Let's go to the drawing board and remix it a bit more to get rid off this muudy buildup problem.

Keep them rolling, man.

I agree with cryo, this has a nice progression. I felt like a little more more could be happening in the second half of the track when it comes to percussion, but other than that I think this is quite well done.

This is a cool track. The sound selection is nice and I think each sound fits together perfectly, although maybe a bit muddy at parts.

The sweep at 2.24 is pretty nice. It would be cool to hear more things like that throughout the track. Good chord progression too.

I like it! Good job.

This feels good, really good, knowing that I have support of you guys.

So much experience, so much talent is hidden behind this site that you never feel wasting your time here. This is what make us stronger, make us inspire, that willingness to not even work hard on your own track but find some more time to help or share your knowledge with your fellows producer.

Thanks for your kind words guys.

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i already told you what i think of this track from the last draft. and you fixed some problems. good job

Thanks man.

Ive listened to this a few times over time and while its not really my cup of tea (im into more club-style tracks) this is a nice calm track with good atmosphere that I can appreciate.

It almsot makes me feel as if there should be a chillout version.

Keep it up man, would be happy to hear the next from ya

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Originally posted by Nightshift It almsot makes me feel as if there should be a chillout version.

I'd really like to make a chillout / downtempo version of this tune, if TranceLover007 wouldn't mind sending me some remix parts.

Nightshift and MrJiveBoJingles as always appreciate and value you comments guys.

MrJiveBoJingles this chillout remix sound like a good idea, so let me know what do you need to get started.

Let’s the music rule the world, guys.

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It would best if I could get the MIDI file(s) for all the parts, and a few WAV files of some of the sounds on their own, especially that pad that starts around 0:33, and some of those sweeps that go in and out in the second half. You could put it all in a ZIP file and upload it to Rapidshare or whatever.

Which sequencer / DAW are you using?