Sounds good. Do you have a compressor on this? Seems like it might be distorting a bit when all the elements are playing together. The sounds you used are all nice, except for the pad in the intro which I felt was really bland.
Nov-11-2009 16:38
Artois
tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Berkeley
No i did not use a compressor on it. but i have been getting that same feeling from the main arp that it takes away from the other elements once it reaches a certain point. I have been having computer issues and my DAW is lacking therefore too. I will check that pad also I am considering compensating for a pad noise with some piano harmonies throughout.
Also on a side note I am releasing this track along with another original and I am looking for remixers. If anyone is serious about working on this let me know.
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: Saint Paul, United States
Atta boy, well developed, keep up the good work.
Nov-12-2009 00:05
MSZ
godspeed
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: kill me
im willin to give the remix a shot, shoot me a pm with a pack
cheers
Nov-12-2009 00:22
Artois
tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Berkeley
Yeah i just recently signed a contract with Bonzai Music for this track as well as the other track on my soundcloud. Ill send you a pack right now msz.
Good work man, I like the way you blend everything together in this track. Really nice atmosphere you have going on in there. Drums are good, bass is develop nicely and drives these tempo very well.
As GrangalanJr suggested, I would try to work on or change this sound in intro stage of your track. The another aspect in composition is to rune something little more dramatic/aggressive sound to spice up this warm atmosphere.
Don’t make it to long as people will get bored of it.
This is really good start for your artist/producer career.
If you are sign already, this is well deserved man.
Good luck and stay cool.
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