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| quote: | Originally posted by twist1
OK I finally have some time to finish the rest of your mix. You are very fortunately to have someone like Bram to take the time and effort to add all of those comments and suggestions. I would love to get that kind of feedback and criticism for my mixes. I agree with most of his comments although he seemed to want more energy from your tracks. If this was a set you were playing at a club or party I would agree, but I think this is a more relaxing set to be enjoyed while chilling on some far away beach or other beautiful locale.
Worldwide seems out of place to me. It has so much energy and you played it in between two much more chill tracks. I'm not feeling the way you abruptly cut into Frustration. Wait something's wrong. Is there a track in between Frustration and Dead Wishes that's not on your tracklist or did I miss something? Ok Frustration is the track with the chick singing, right? And the next one has a dood asking if we want to see the other side of him...Did I lose track somewhere?
This was a very good set Some great tracks. I think the flow could be improved by transitioning into and out of tracks with a lot of energy more gradually. I really liked the way your mix ended. Beautiful track and it left me wanting more. |
Yeah, VERY grateful for Bram's feedback indeed as I was for your own also.
It was the first proper mix I have done for a while (furthermore only the second I have ever posted on-line)and was kinda nervous that it would dissapear without a trace.
Yes, there was a tune I misses out on the tracklist......oops (now edited)
I didn't plan the mix at all (exception being the acapella) and just went with the flow I was feeling at the time. Frustration was mixed in a litle too early. I guess I was trying to cram too much in.
I was trying to keep a certain tension to the mix. I guess I achieved that to a degree, but will definitely take the points raised constructively and consider structuring and energy levels more carefully.
Once again, I can't stress how grateful I am for some honest feedback.
Gives me something to work with on my next mix.
Thanks again people!
Nice to see people enjoyed the tuneage though.
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Last edited by A.B on Nov-28-2009 at 14:25
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