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There are some nice atmospheric ideas in there.
To me it sounds like it's the version of a track before it's had a proper mixdown. The whisper type sound in the background could use a bit of extra reverb to get it sitting properly for example. A bit more EQ on all the parts would help seperate the bass, mids and highs too.
The track itself works fine though so not a major issue! 
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