http://www.tindeck.com/listen/nqcy

Some production issues have already been brought up with the opening, hopefully it's still a solid tune musically. The breakdown is probably one of the best things I've ever done.

C&C appreciated. Cheers.

Personally, I would take out the Pad that plays as soon as the song starts. It feels like there's a constant drone in the background. Maybe work some more on the percussion too, because it's quite thin.

Some pretty cool atmospheric FX! I think your breakdown is very, very nice, but for me it doesn't fit the rest of the track. The drums that arrive during it are also quite good.

Good job, Kysora!

I got to go home but I will give it a run when I get there.
I can't wait to listen to this updated version of your already good sounding track man.

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This isn't an updated version, haha, I don't think I'll do much with this. I'll probably make something else for the TA album.

Thanks though.

Sorry man,

Crazy afternoon yesterday but I'm on it right now.

Great so far, interesting intro.

Stay tune.

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Very interesting concept you have going on in there. Structure has some complex components build into it. Love this out of tune intro part which is slowly transition main melodic part of your song – well done.

It has nice worm feel in it, good sounding/dramatic sounds and it is drawing your attention – I like it.

This is another solid composition from you man, great job man.

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Ah that synth is so bright. The chords confuse me too. Nice elements and stuff but it sounds really "out there" and strays off from any main idea. The synths are really bright and kind of harsh.

The break is very good, where did you get the woodwind sound from?

The entire mix sounds totally over-limited and sounds like it's clipping and distorting badly though.

There's definately a very cool track trying to get out of it though.

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Originally posted by tehlord The break is very good, where did you get the woodwind sound from?

It's an old flute soundfont I have.

Maybe it's just because I'm listening to it through the headphones I mixed this track with but I can't hear any serious distortion.. if any of you are turning up the volume on tindeck, don't. I'm not saying the mix isn't bad, maybe I just can't hear it in my own tunes, but if any of you are doing that it's going to distort the hell out of it.

Oh yeah, I turned the volume down in the browser and it's much better

Not a great place to stream music from though!

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Ah that synth is so bright. The chords confuse me too. Nice elements and stuff but it sounds really "out there" and strays off from any main idea. The synths are really bright and kind of harsh.

i agree with evolve140.. the whole sound is sort of "out there"
it comes together a little after the break down tho..
this track definitely has great potential to become something great. the breakdown part is beautiful. i loved it.keep at it.

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I hear two separate tracks really in this. The breakdown and back half really seem to fit together, but the front end doesn't work for the construction of the track.

I do think you worked really hard on a great breakdown, but it gets lost because of the odd front part of the track. I'd focus reconstruction there as the rest seems to balance out alright.

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