It's kind of emotionless and boring. There isn't a hook, and the production is poor.

Last edited by Evolve140 on Jan-07-2010 at 21:43

The track needs a lot of work IMO.

In addition to the above reply, the tune sounds quite muddy in the low-end; and there is almost no presence at all in the high-end.

Keep at it.

ok thanks for the feedback, will work on it

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I'm listening on bad earphones, but I can still tell that the mix is quite muddy.

I must say that I quite disagree with Evolve. Some of the elements are dark and experimental (which I like), and I don't find it boring at all. The drums, however, seem to lack compared to the rest of the track. It would be nice to hear this with a clearer mixdown!

Good stuff.