At the same moment by madiroze

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I think you have a lot of ideas down, but by start you should try finding a more decent kick sample. This one sounds like a little bassy tick, and it kind of distracts me from listening since it is so bland... it kind of detaches itself from the song. I like the pads in the back of your song, I think the rolling bass could sound a big bigger.. but a lot of the music works well.
cheers