Everything's a bit too loud, the overall mixing could use some work. It's very melodically cluttered too during the buildup

You have some nice ideas though, just work on your mixing.

Keysora's a bit of an ace at this genre. I also find myself in agreement with the harmonic/melodic clutter.

There are lower octaves some of the instruments you have playing can be placed on and their position in the mix ought to be regulated with techniques like automation, complimentary equalization and filtering. Overall, the mix sounds quite bright - even with the bass-notes and kick drums off-setting it.

Musically, the ideas are wonderful, though.

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very high pitched sounds it's the first thing i noticed, i actually like that fast played notes but i think it's a bit repetitive, with some work can become a good track.