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Much better! I think the bass-line (you might try layering it) can come up a bit, but, really, in-so-far as something that got my attention, nicely done. Like the lead with the formant filter on it. The break's a little too long and I don't care for the cuts, although if you were to get a little more surgically glitchy with it, that might not be so bad. Keeping that lead in the same place, after the re-launch, doesn't really do the song any favors. It needs to do something else.
But still, much better.
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my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012
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