Bass is out of key with the synth. I hope you fix that. Nope. You've added another synth which is out of key with the first synth, which is out of key with the now fluctuating bass. Did you really have to name this after a Transformer? Really?

Synth coming in at the break - the mono-note lead - it's annoying and shrill. I like the melody arp for the first time but at the second time it cycled, I was done with it.

Okay. I'm done. I could only take 3:50 of this song. Sorry. There's some good ideas but they're not very well connected and it gets tedious to listen to, when you hear the same thing repeating every four to eight measures.

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Bass is out of key with the synth. I hope you fix that. Nope. You've added another synth which is out of key with the first synth, which is out of key with the now fluctuating bass. Did you really have to name this after a Transformer? Really? Synth coming in at the break - the mono-note lead - it's annoying and shrill. I like the melody arp for the first time but at the second time it cycled, I was done with it. Okay. I'm done. I could only take 3:50 of this song. Sorry. There's some good ideas but they're not very well connected and it gets tedious to listen to, when you hear the same thing repeating every four to eight measures.

Firstly thank you for taking the time to analyze my track.

The synth you are reffering to is the electronic sounding one?