The lead hook gets a little repetitive on this and the high-end was popping my ears a bit (not enough to bleed - no worries) and could be toned down a little. I really like the idea of it and the music bed. It seemed like a lot of was going on in the back ground that may have been drowned out by the lead's prominence - it would be stuff I'd want to notch down that lead on to more adequately hear.

Love the break-beat, but there were bits that went a little too long without any beat, at all.


Keep at it, man. You've got a decent ear. It just needs experience, and maybe a little rest, as it sounds like it might be a little fatigued as evidenced by the high-end being a little too prominent.

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Eddie tottally agree with you,, Those violins are a bit harsh on the ears, a will try to find other sounds. I think is a goog idea too to cut the lead and maybe let other sounds apear.

I work with it, thank you man for the advices.