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torus
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Hard-trance, need feedback

So from the best of my knowledge, this new track I finished is closer to hard-trance than it is to trance, and I'd LOVE some feedback

Song is right here:

Darkness(Finished Version) by Torus

It's also up for free download if you like


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djgraemeb
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oh yes we are loving this track the whole track from start to finish its great!

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torus
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Ok so I did a ton of mixing to it now and the quality is much better, here's the new link:

http://soundcloud.com/torus/darkness-finished-version


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Looney4Clooney
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the fundamental kick and bass groove is missing. It sounds incredibly thin. Your rhythm disappears when the doubling melody comes in. You need to use compression to keep this under control. All the synths are very brash and ear piercing. The actual sound is very dated ala 2001. The beginning and end are not very dj friendly or inspiring for that matter. I also wouldn't call this hard.

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EddieZilker
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Originally posted by Mad for Brad
the fundamental kick and bass groove is missing. It sounds incredibly thin. Your rhythm disappears when the doubling melody comes in. You need to use compression to keep this under control. All the synths are very brash and ear piercing. The actual sound is very dated ala 2001. The beginning and end are not very dj friendly or inspiring for that matter. I also wouldn't call this hard.


+1

Plus the highs are too high and it sounds like there is some unwanted pumping going on.


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