Hey guys, this is a pretty unique track right here. I've uploaded the original mix and an extended club mix.

I'm looking for feedback if possible, but especially REMIXERS!
If anybody is interested in remixing this song PLEASE let me know I'd love to have you on board!

Thanks!

Valenirsary (Original Mix) by The System

Valenirsary (Club Mix) by The System

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Links:

Valenirsary (Original Mix)

Valenirsary (Club Mix)

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Interesting track.

I think some of the patches used sound a little basic and the clap is perhaps a little dry.
The melody isn't strong enough to carry the track all the way through and I would possible look for a little variation.

Percussion is quite basic. The shaker sounds like it comes from Nalin and Kane - Beachball, but nothing wrong in that.

The whole track I think could do with more work as it still sounds like a work in progress. You would need to generate a bit more tension and work your builds and climaxes out so they deliver a bit more payload.

I still enjoyed it though and look forward to hear what you come up with next.

Cheers
Nem

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