The first 10 seconds are really atmospheric but after that it doesn't travel anywhere and sound unfinished Adi. Use the vibe in the early part before the drums start to build something special!

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Cheers for the feedback , this is the first draft if you will and ideas are accepted. And I do know what you mean about the first 10 seconds then sounding raw , and I do think it needs a second melody too!

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