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I'm just going to give a quick run through of opinions - I don't mean to be cutting if it sounds like I am (forgive me in advance). I more or less tend to see some things as "good" and others as "drop and do over" in this tune.
Percussion and bass flow smoothly with each other - from the quick listen I took, it sounds like they're EQ'd well enough, although early on I felt like there was a bit too much on the low-end of the kick; might have just been an of the moment thing though.
Melodically, unfortunately, this is rather dull. There's nothing that makes me remember the track's tune. Nothing particularly special about the synths that would (perhaps) on some level replace a significant melody. I'm not sure that any of the sounds really stand out - nor how well they meld into the mix. If you're stuck on the sounds, perhaps some reverb will help set some space, but again it's seriously deficient in this area. A pad of sorts or some atmosphere wouldn't hurt either.
Structurally it sounded decent enough (though again, nothing that particularly stood out) - so no faulting there, I guess. On the whole, it's a pretty decent effort; keep at it 
Cheers!
P.S. Turn off the autoplay, if you can.
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