Hello,

its not bad for a beginner to be honest. Not exactly my type of music, but ok.
I think you could try to lower the volume of the clap and make the hihats a bit louder.
I saw you use ableton. Group the drums like, bassdrum, hithats, claps etc. and apply some compression to glue them better together.
You can use the Ableton 'Multiband Dynamics' for that.

Its also good, to compare your track to similar released track to find
possible improvements.
For that, I create a new live set and add my track and some other comparable released tracks. Switching between them gives you a good idea, what sounds different (wrong).

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Thanks for the useful comment, I will consider your advices and try them

Nice sound dude. But you should work on a more interesting main synth. Sounds abit boring to be honest. Maybe tweak the instruments you are using to make them more unique. Try Chorus, delay, reverbs, bitcrusher... whatever. Keep experimenting and tweaking until you almost lose your mind!

It's pretty damn good for your first track. Loving that clap but it is quite over powering.

Like the others said, just keep messing with your synths and effects to create cooler sounds.

Im listening to it on a laptop so can't really 'hear' what's going on to give full feedback.

Keep it up

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thank you guys for the feedback, I will keep on trying and trying again, and I promise I will return with a much better song