http://flamevault.com/~dyvim/Sean%2...%20Untitled.mp3


Feedback would be hugely appreciated as I'm aiming to finish this track by next weekend and give it out to a few rather famous producers so they can laugh at me =P

kick needs more lower tones and more power
bassline is ok..
clap is... hmm... :/
hats... a little simple
as for the melody.. the chords are ok
it's a long break and it needs more energy after it
as for the sound quality... sounds like fruity... correct me if i am wrong. it does have potential though.


sorry.. in it's current form it's not my cup of tea

just DL it and gotta agree with some of what robert said! however do some of those things to it and it could be good! after the breakdown i think you gotta give it more energy, more of a kick! post it up again if you decide to do some more stuff to it and give us a shout!

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

Thanks for the feedback guys =) I'll be revamping it several more times yet. I have a bad habit of giving up on tracks before making a good attempt at milking it for all it's worth, so I'm not gonna do that this time.

Any suggestions for giving the track more energy after the buildup? I agree with this point completely, but can't really think of what to do to give it more energy.

And just FYI, track was made in Buzz (www.buzzmachines.com).

just my suggestions for after the buildup! drop in a harder or louder bass! add some snares! and some hi hats! just something to grab the attention and drive the track forward!

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

Sounds good, will experiment around a little =)