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Heya man, first of all, the intro part is pretty good but there is too much focus on the main riff and it's quite hard to follow as well... Hmmm the new melody doesn't really connect with the first one, sounds pretty disharmonic.
Other than that I feel like there isn't enuff emotion and interest in the track... I do think the first melody would fit a chillout version of this track.
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