Hey man, nice deep kick and good sound, but Im not a fan of panned base-drums, the breaks need some variations, melody something. After the break kind it starts again, adding new elements and a more gradual arrange may help to keep the attention.

Good work, keep it up!
Cheers.
Mise.

hey...i like the sounds in this man....a little more variation and addition tunes could really help this out alot...
with the kick...if you consider the intended audience then the kcik rhythm and panning just wont work out...maybe try a lower kick with a small snare either 1 car left or right of it to give it that shuffled effect..which im assuming is what you are after..

this could be a really good if you adjust those small things and mayeb add some more tunage
good work!
Crest

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thanks for the response guys!

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the kcik rhythm and panning just wont work out...maybe try a lower kick with a small snare either 1 car left or right of it to give it that shuffled effect

Can you explain this one a little bit more?