Those bongo-toms could use some movement in terms of swing or delays.

Otherwise it sounds pretty tight. I like it, nice and catchy.. could definitely listen to this on my own.

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Thanks for the feedback Subtle! Im going to look at those bongos when i finish the track.. Glad to hear your liking it!

Quite tight and catchy but it would improve if you use sounds that sound like they are not stock in trade presets straight out of Gladiator etc. The mix is clear but again could use some pazzaz and be less 'stock standard' if you know what I mean - but it all comes with time so keep on nworking it man.

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Thanks Richard! Yeah i know the sounds are pretty basic (testing my new omnisphere btw) I have never been so much into layering stuff together, maybe because it slows my computer too much. I will consider this also in future, now that i have new computer.

what is pazzaz??

I agree with the above, I do like the clarity and space of the beats. Tha 1.30 synth is taking to much space for my taste.

good work!

and I would work out a sharper snare