Definitely works. Needs more kick and bass, but you're nailing it, man.

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Thnks Edd.
Yes there is still missing a sub bass line that Im working out and is giving some trouble,,

Your'e putting a lot of work into this one - it's sounding better with each incarnation. Keep going man. Maybe a little more groove and swing will help make it a little less rigid.

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Hi RB,, yes I am really hammering this!, I want to get to the point where I cant suggest any improvement, having fun in the meanwhile.. . Im trying to combine depth and "punch". When I finish with sound design, I plan to make it less rigid by automating it.
Lets se how it turns

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Last edited by Mise on Dec-29-2010 at 04:45

I uploaded now the correct one. sorry guys.

Try using hard knee, fast attack compression on the kick. You could keep what you have going to the main and run a send to a bus with a compressor on that.

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sure E.Z, tomorrow with fresh ears, Ill check that!, thanks for the advice fella.

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Try using hard knee, fast attack compression on the kick. You could keep what you have going to the main and run a send to a bus with a compressor on that.

Just updated with some parallel compression on the kick.