sounds very solid, i think you should emphasize the bass more.

Thanks.

I had the bass higher earlier on, but lowered after hearing it through my pioneers. Im no mastering expert, so its probably nothing worth losing sleep over. Just a case at the mo of becoming a decent producer and coming up with catchy melodies

Lead synth reminds me of steel drums. Cool.

Yeah, the bass needs to be pulled up a bit though.

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I really like the melody, very catchy! Definitely need to bring up the low-end and also your kick needs to pack more punch, it sounds a bit drowned sometimes.

Enjoyed the track, cheers!

the structure sounds and feels good....melody is nice! is it me or is this sounding really lo-quality (kinda lo-fi)...makes it hard to comment otherwise

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Thanks, hopefully that's something to do with it being on youtube!

I think this shows some good main hook potential on your part and mixing is comming on.

My only gripes are firstly some of your sounds are very basic such as the clap and the hats which sound like a basic sinlge loop. Secondly you need a lot more in the way of fx noises, sweeps, hits, reverses, downers, uppers and what not if you want a fully rounded work in the way good pro releases have. I'd strongly recommend you import a similar style pro track and make a note of how many sweeps and what not are used - it can often run into dozens.

Keep working it.

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Thanks for the reply Richard, valid points and nothing there that I can disagree with.

At least most people seem to like the melody, so hopefully the track is something worth working on