I much prefer your last track Mr Stone. This is ok, but seems to lack the original sound your last had, but if you like it, thats all that counts.
The kick here is for my taste taking it just bags of room so the track cannot breath.
The bass at first I liked, but it fatigued me quickly so I';m thinking use other bass sounds for some phrases and really chop it all up to keep it interesting.

The break was just a basic synth break - couldn't really get into it.

I can see you have talent, but you cant win everyone, as I know all to well.

I'll look out for your next.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I much prefer your last track Mr Stone. This is ok, but seems to lack the original sound your last had, but if you like it, thats all that counts. The kick here is for my taste taking it just bags of room so the track cannot breath. The bass at first I liked, but it fatigued me quickly so I';m thinking use other bass sounds for some phrases and really chop it all up to keep it interesting. The break was just a basic synth break - couldn't really get into it. I can see you have talent, but you cant win everyone, as I know all to well. I'll look out for your next.

wow this is really what i needed to hear "you cant please everyone "
thanks alot for the honest feedback and yeah the next one is uploading to soundcloud right now, more like the last one :P

I don't get the 33 second break. That section right after doesn't have enough for me to hold my attention.

The kick is a bit too boomy, imho. Cool elements and synths, you might want to consider condensing the breakdown. It does need quite a bit of work to be played out, however.