Hi!
I started working on a new track and I'm half way through it but I think I lost all objectivity after listening to it for 4 days straight. I was wondering if you could give me your comments. What doesn't work? What should be changed? Any comments are welcomed!

Here's what I have so far:
http://playstopgo.com/temp/murphy.mp3

Thanks a million guys!

everything sounds good to me. If I had that as a starting point I would try and build in some more melody. i'd alter it slightly to find something a bit more catchy. I think it could be quite good when its finished.

Thank you. I'll try adding melody or a vocal. I'll see which one works out better.

make sure you post it. id like to see where this one ends up

Will do! Thanks!