Pete - I added some comments to the cloud

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thank you for your comments

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its not bad but the leads are too loud

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I got to agree with the others, the lead is a bit too loud but I really like the melody and especially the style! The bassline is good too. The strings in the back are a bit basic but they give a good feel to it, i like your track!!

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This has good elements but in terms of events that take place during the track it's a very linear i.e. Here is the intro, here is the break, here is the drop, here is the outro, end of.

The lead is way too loud as stated by all, the other thing is you need some more complimenting melodies as by itself it isn't catchy enough for people to latch onto it.

The bass and kick are well put together though, but in terms of drive this track is very basic.

That said, always great to hear what people are doing and look forward to hear more from you.

Cheers
Nem

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Thanks people for your feedback. Next time the lead sound won't be so loud. I also agree that the build up is very basic, this is another area I need to work on. Next track coming soon

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overall kick/bass combo needs to go up
pluck can go a bit softer
lead after the break a lot softer

Overal nice track, just clean up the mix

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many thanks to everybody for your feedback. i will leave the track the way it is and i will concentrate on my new track instead

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