Rodri I want to be honest and say this is all over the place and would be quite difficult to tame and get into shape.

I've made loads of dudd bum tunes so please don't feel down or anything stupid - sometimes you just have to move on and learn from the journey.

If there's one area I think you should focus on it's getting smooth transitions into your next piece - so nothing sounds out of kilter or abrupt

Cheers Man - keep it comming

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thank you for your opinion, the connection between the section is the last thing i do beacuse that's like the easy part, i usually start with the melody and the breakdown because then i can see the shape of the tune and i don't get disencouraged.

I wanted more opinions about melody, groove, breakdown... i think the breakdown + build up and drop is the weakest part right now, i've some vocals ready for the breakdown and after the drop i feel i've to change some sounds, or introduce them in the build up because now the flow is cut, what do you think of this?¿

This are mainly my views of this, with this i try to recreate the Avicii style that is working so well on the dancefloors, although i don't find this very danceable, i think i went too melodic.