I've been working on music for 10+ years in industrial and trance related areas, but only recently have I tried to leap into material that would be considered dedicated to the trance genre. Just looking for some feedback and comments on this snippet - if this is starting to have the right spirit. Thanks!

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Sounds really good. Love the low sustained bass - very nice separation between it and the other synths. Pretty skilfull chords to.

Yep, headed in right direction.

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thanks a ton for the feedback. I'm gonna keep messing around with this! =)

Nicely produced. Whack a groovy baseline in there and we're cooking with fire!

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Wow really nice track, I love the low bass sound and the balance between the synths. Keep on doing this man!

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Pretty smooth. Was expecting some groovier hats, tho.

thanks again for the great feedback.