Haven't worked on anything like this in over a year or 2, though I'd give it a shot tonight. Enjoy, CC welcome

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This is VERY cool - like something you would hear on a top end Perfume ad. Vibe is excellent.

Few ideas for ya;

1) Introduce another element at about 55secs - like a wierd offset tom that plays once every 4 measures - just to give more of a journey

2) I like the idea of the snare variation shuffles but the execution is just slightly off timing wise

3) That scratching bit is piss poor bro!1 C'mon use your imagination and make something decent in that slot, lol!!

Let me know when you want more feedback

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Thanks man, not sure I was expecting that. Agreed about the scratches, hence the messing around. I've taken a more serious approach somewhat, hopefully this is better sounding, see what you think.

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