Hey I like some of your laid back sounds here, such as the bass, but honestly the main little twinkly riff is too basic and unoriginal to be able to grab attention - I have riffs just like that which act as the audition of presets on my Roland hardware synth.

So I like the laid back approach but if you don't mind my honesty the core melodic component will not sufficiently engage people out there in the world away from forums - but by all means prove me wrong dude.

I always like looking out for your stuff - keep it comming

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Hey I like some of your laid back sounds here, such as the bass, but honestly the main little twinkly riff is too basic and unoriginal to be able to grab attention - I have riffs just like that which act as the audition of presets on my Roland hardware synth.

This +

Even though its written in minor,if you wrote it in a chromatic scale or an unpopular mode the timbre would be more ironic.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

I quite like the rhodes, but it bore me before the intro had managed to finish due to its repetitiveness.

The laidback nature appealed to me. However, what I don't like is how the track seemed to suck the energy out of me and honestly provided quite a tedious experience at certain sections. There's plenty of room not being used IMO. More evolvement of sounds and interesting tweaks to the structure would definitely urge me to have a second listen